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punctuation, sentence structure, and grammar.


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I thought it might be worth having a place to post examples of sentence structure, punctuation, and grammar, making a difference to meaning.

 

An old, and most likely apocryphal, example:

"An English professor wrote on the board: A woman without her man is nothing.

The class was then asked to punctuate the sentence

The men wrote: "A woman without her man, is nothing." 

The women wrote: "A woman:  without her, man is nothing.""

 

Please let's  have no argument about the debate or the merits of grammatical analysis - start a thread about it if you like - this is just for examples, hopefully a bit funny if possible but not necessarily.

 

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I thought it might be worth having a place to post examples of sentence structure, punctuation, and grammar, making a difference to meaning.

 

An old, and most likely apocryphal, example:

"An English professor wrote on the board: A woman without her man is nothing.

The class was then asked to punctuate the sentence

The men wrote: "A woman without her man is nothing." 

The women wrote: "A woman:  man is nothing.""

 

​We learn from that, that men do not use punctuation, while women can express themselves in few words - in this case the sentence is reduced by 28.5714% fewer words. 

Let's try again:

A woman, without her man, is nothing.

A woman: without her, man is nothing. 

 

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We will be with our son & family in Peterchurch this weekend. I looked up the church notices:

The Wye Dore Parishes
[Tyberton, Madley, Vowchurch, Turnastone and Peterchurch]
Rogation Sunday – 3rd May 2015
A traditional celebration for all the family when we pray for a good harvest,
eat lunch together and “beat” the bounds of the parish. There will also be an
adult baptism at St Peter’s spring.

Service @11.00am
At St Peters Church, Peterchurch

At approximately 11.30 we will head out for our walk.
Please bring a packed lunch.
There will be a short walk and a longer walk for you to choose from.
There are no other services in our Church’s on this Sunday

Was that written by the local greengrocer :) ?

 

 

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I'll admit.  I am a fairly good speaker.  I annunciate clearly.  Went to some really good schools.  However I will admit to.  I slept a lot through punctuation and some of spelling.  I have a hard time understanding southern vernacular sometimes.  Being as I went to school in Mi. and NY.  True,  southern schools never seemed to get there share of the pie.  When it came to education funding.  But before I get uppity, lol.  I like this better:

 

Proverbs 9:10  The fear of the LORD is the beginning of wisdom: and the knowledge of the holy is understanding.

 

 

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Here's another hypothetical example:

Happy, Christian, is smelly.

Happy Christian is smelly.

​I think your first should read: "Happy, Christian is smelly" with only one comma.

The second may be accurate depending on how much of life she has put off while waiting on those grandchildren.

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Here's another hypothetical example:

Happy, Christian, is smelly.

Happy Christian is smelly.

The first attempt,  with the commas,  is not a good sentence.  The second only works because H C is a forum member.  

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