New tract I am working on

[TheBibleSender]

If Evolution is true...

...How do you tell right from wrong? Evolution says everything is a result of some cosmic accident billions of years ago. If this is true why do we have a conscience? The word conscience come from two words con = with and science = knowledge. When we do wrong our conscience convicts us of sin. Is it reasonable to believe that our conscience evolved or that is was given to us by our Creator. The Bible says "In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth." (Genesis 1:1) God has given us a way to tell right from wrong. The Ten Commandments. "Thou shalt not bear false witness...", "Thou shalt not steal.", "Thou shalt not take the name of the LORD thy God in vain..." (Exodus 20) Have you ever broken any of these commandments? If the Bible is true about the beginning then perhaps it is true about the end. The Bible says "...it is appointed unto men once to die, but after this the judgment." (Hebrews 9:27) Listen to your conscience you have sinned against a Holy God and you will stand before him on judgment day. Will you be innocent or guilty. Heaven or hell? The Bible says "There is none righteous, no, not one:" (Romans 3:10) You know you will be guilty and end up in hell. That's not God's will. Two thousand years ago Jesus Christ took your punishment when He died on the cross. Three days later He defeated death when He rose again. Don't trust your eternal soul to blind chance. Repent and trust in the only hope of eternal salvation. Jesus Christ! "For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved." (Romans 10:13) The ultimate statistic: 10 out of 10 people die. www.afterdeathwhat.com

Edited September 29, 2010 by TheBibleSender

[HappyChristian]

I like your ultimate statistic.

I think you've got something good going on with this.

[TheBibleSender]

Does anyone notice any mistakes on this grammar spelling punctuation etc? Any help will be greatly appreciated!

[trc123]

Does anyone notice any mistakes on this grammar spelling punctuation etc? Any help will be greatly appreciated!

Yes, there are a few mistakes:


If Evolution is true...

...How do you tell right from wrong? Evolution says everything is a result of some cosmic accident billions of years ago. If this is true why do we have a conscience? The word conscience come^comes from two words [b]con = with ^{"con" = "with"}and science = knowledge ^{"science" = "knowledge"}. When we do wrong our conscience convicts us of sin. Is it reasonable to believe that our conscience evolved or that is was given to us by our Creator.^? The Bible says^, "In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth." (Genesis 1:1) God has given us a way to tell right from wrong. The Ten Commandments. "Thou shalt not bear false witness...", "Thou shalt not steal.", "Thou shalt not take the name of the LORD thy God in vain..." (Exodus 20) Have you ever broken any of these commandments? If^Since the Bible is true about the beginning then perhaps it is true about the end. The Bible says "...it is appointed unto men once to die, but after this the judgment." (Hebrews 9:27) Listen to your conscience^!you^You have sinned against a Holy God and you will stand before him on judgment day. Will you be innocent or guilty.^{?Will you go to} Heaven or hell? The Bible says^, "There is none righteous, no, not one:" (Romans 3:10) You know you will be guilty and end up in hell. That's not God's will. Two thousand years ago Jesus Christ took your punishment when He died on the cross. Three days later He defeated death when He rose again. Don't trust your eternal soul to blind chance. Repent and trust in the only hope of eternal salvation. Jesus Christ! "For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved." (Romans 10:13) The ultimate statistic: 10 out of 10 people die. www.afterdeathwhat.com

With the changes I've suggested above it would read:

If Evolution is true...

...How do you tell right from wrong? Evolution says everything is a result of some cosmic accident billions of years ago. If this is true why do we have a conscience? The word conscience comes from two words "con" = "with" and "science" = "knowledge". When we do wrong our conscience convicts us of sin. Is it reasonable to believe that our conscience evolved or that is was given to us by our Creator? The Bible says, "In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth." (Genesis 1:1) God has given us a way to tell right from wrong. The Ten Commandments. "Thou shalt not bear false witness...", "Thou shalt not steal.", "Thou shalt not take the name of the LORD thy God in vain..." (Exodus 20) Have you ever broken any of these commandments? Since the Bible is true about the beginning then it is true about the end. The Bible says "...it is appointed unto men once to die, but after this the judgment." (Hebrews 9:27) Listen to your conscience! You have sinned against a Holy God and you will stand before him on judgment day. Will you be innocent or guilty? Will you go to Heaven or hell? The Bible says, "There is none righteous, no, not one:" (Romans 3:10) You know you will be guilty and end up in hell. That's not God's will. Two thousand years ago Jesus Christ took your punishment when He died on the cross. Three days later He defeated death when He rose again. Don't trust your eternal soul to blind chance. Repent and trust in the only hope of eternal salvation. Jesus Christ! "For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved." (Romans 10:13) The ultimate statistic: 10 out of 10 people die. www.afterdeathwhat.com

[TheBibleSender]

Great thanks. I have updated it with your corrections and added a few things.

If Evolution is true...

...How do you tell right from wrong? Evolution says everything is a result of some cosmic accident billions of years ago. If this is true why do we have a sense of right and wrong? Why do we have a conscience? The word conscience comes from two words "con" = "with" and "science" = "knowledge". When we do wrong our conscience convicts us. Is is reasonable to believe that our conscience evolved or that is was given to us by our Creator. The Bible says "In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth." (Genesis 1:1) God has given us a way to tell right from wrong. The Ten Commandments. "Thou shalt not bear false witness..." (Exodus 20:16) Have you ever lied? "Thou shalt not steal." (Exodus 20:15) Have you ever stolen anything regardless of the value? "Thou shalt not take the name of the LORD thy God in vain..." (Exodus 20:7) Have you ever used God's name as a swear word? Since the Bible is true about the beginning then it is true about the end. The Bible says "...it is appointed unto men once to die, but after this the judgment." (Hebrews 9:27) Listen to your conscience! You have sinned against a Holy God and you will stand before him on judgment day. Will you be innocent or guilty? Will you go to Heaven or Hell? The Bible says "There is none righteous, no, not one:" (Romans 3:10) You know you will be guilty and end up in hell. That's not God's will. Two thousand years ago Jesus Christ took your punishment when He died on the cross. Three days later He defeated death when He rose again. Don't trust your eternal soul to blind chance. Repent and trust in the only hope of eternal salvation. Jesus Christ! "For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved." (Romans 10:13) The ultimate statistic: 10 out of 10 people die. www.afterdeathwhat.com