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Sorry but I need a few people to watch this again if they can. I have edited it a bit and added some content. It is about 9 minutes. Please watch for punctuation grammar anything that is a mistake. I do have to tweak the timing just a bit at the end for the music but other that that I think I am finished. Here is the link http://www.onetruemedia.com/shared?p=d068c93bad7531f34aca4b&skin_id=1602&utm_source=otm&utm_medium=text_url thanks a lot God bless. :)

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Hey I watched it :)
I think I would rephrase, "So what will happen?" Maybe more like, "Should we fear the end is near?"?
I'm not sure if it was just my screen, but is there anyway to fix how pixel-y it looks?
Maybe in between all the Bible passages, ask a question, like How is Jesus going to come? Before Matthew 24:27
When you wrote Matthew 24:37 you put Noe isntead of Noah
When you say the disciples asked what the signs would be, the next sentence starts with "And" That is technically not correct. A sentence should never start with and. And, because (haha just kidding...)
Maybe put the names under the false Christs? I don't know who some of them are, and a couple look like what people thnk Jesus looks like
If the first picture is of Jesus, its inaccurate (I'm sorry this is one of my pet peeves, but Corinthians states a man shouldn't have long hair, and I know Jesus wouldn't violate that, He had short hair, contrary to popular belief.)
When you say, "and there shall be famines" You put a comma, then an elipses ",..." I would pick one or the other.
The sentence, "So again..." I would say like, "Though we see signs, we cannot forget the Bible says etc etc"
Instead of asking, If you died today... tie in the video, maybe say, "If the world did end today and Jesus came back for His own, would you go with Him" or something like that :)
I would explain the verses at the end about salvation more...

Sorry I am very picky, I really did like it. I will definately be posting this on my facebook once its complete! Thanks for this! People need to know the truth!

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I thought it was great!

Sometimes the words were too quick for people who have never heard/seen them before. You might tweek that a little.

Let us know when the final version is available.

Thanks.

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Here is the one I uploaded to Youtube. It's very frustrating because it will not allow me to choose the thumbnail I want. I tried several tricks but the only way to get it would be to put the thumbnail I want directly in the middle of the video which completely wrecks it. Anyway here is the link.

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Please pray that this video will get lots of views, and that God will use it to give many a desire to study the bible and that many will come to know Christ. God bless. :)


I think it will reach those God intends. Very good work and I will share the link with the lost. I have someone in particular in mind.

P.S. your video is in my prayers daily.
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I think it will reach those God intends. Very good work and I will share the link with the lost. I have someone in particular in mind.

P.S. your video is in my prayers daily.


Thank you for your prayers. God bless. :)
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Please also pray that others would download this and hand them out for evangelism. I have found a good down loader called YouTube down loader that will download videos in high quality. http://download.cnet.com/YouTube-Downloader/3000-2071_4-10647340.html God bless. :)

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