Please give me your advice

[TheBibleSender]

Please give me your opinion. Here is the first draft of the When Death Comes Knocking video. I know I still need to do some tweaking with some of the timing but what do you think? So I make it a little longer? Add a few more verses? I'm not really to keen on the music either. Would like to find something different. http://www.onetruemedia.com/shared?p=d0680367e1e479be5f13dd&skin_id=1008&utm_source=otm&utm_medium=text_url Thanks. God bless.

[TheBibleSender]

Well I added some different music. It is a little "spooky" but I don't see any other type of music being used considering the name of the video. Please let me know what you think. God bless.

[Soj]

Not bad brother, I pray that God will use it.

To me, you took a while to get to the punchline, I wonder if some people will cut it short before the gospel is presented? Another idea is to have more instruction on exactly how to be saved.