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Members Jerry Posted November 9, 2021 Members Share Posted November 9, 2021 (edited) It's not bad. I would find a different word than "magic" in the first stanza though. If you want to be Biblical, that is a word you should definitely not use to refer to Jesus Christ (in the Bible, magic is evil and is strongly condemned). Perhaps something like "mighty." Also, I would capitalize Father in reference to God the Father. Other than that it is pretty good and fitting for the purpose you state. Edited November 9, 2021 by Jerry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Members Jerry Posted November 9, 2021 Members Share Posted November 9, 2021 May the Lord bless you in your endeavour to share the truth with others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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